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Here is a organisation, the villain Twofold and his father (soon to be announced) are leaders of. It will have a big part in the comics to come.

Order of Obscurity.

The Order of Obscurity is an ancient, powerful and secret order of warriors, mercenaries and assassins located in the Altai Mountains of Mongolia, who when they started, believed that they were acting to restore balance to the world by acting as a self-appointed law and order against the human decadence and inner violence. For thousands of years they have intervened in the past all around the world, they were the real reason for the end of World War 2, the assassination of Gandhi, the cause of the crusades. 
Now though, the Order’s desires have changed, they now stand as an illegal and sinister society; removing anyone who doesn't deem fit to be alive in their leaders’ eyes… Each and every member of the Order were and are fanatical to the causes.

The leaders of the Order changed before the discovery of immortality, the leader now is Zyhu Bral Lux, he came to be leader a few hundred years ago, he is Immortal and taught every member of the secret order, but the armies of darkness are his son’s to command.

Each warrior is a ghost, unseen and unspoken of. They are the utmost, complete masters in deception and close quarter combat; know how to turn your fears against you, they completely understand stealth and know how to manipulate light and darkness. Zyhu’s son is leader of the armies of the order and one of the finest warriors in the world.

The Order of Obscurity’s next target is Depone City, America. They've had enough. 

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Now, another villain. 

Number 2. Twofold.

Name:  Twofold

Real name: Kas Lux

Age: 30

Gender: Male

Height: 6ft

Weight: 239lbs.

Location: Altai Mountains (last known)

Abilities: Health regeneration factor, A tactical genius, Extremely high durability and enhanced peak reflexes, a master of mental discipline and 111 terms of close-combat, expert swordsman skills, the advanced capability to use opponent’s environments against them, and the ability to focus power; increasing speed, aggression, strength and agility by a factor of two. Uses 2 katana’s and throwing knives as well as fighting in hand to hand.

Suit/Armour: He wears the armour of higher deception that he earned through the order, it is made from carbon fibre plates on a Axlatra rock fibre, one of the strongest and lightest natural substances known, although only the order really know how to shape it. It is completely black but changes its colour due to his surroundings if he wants to.

About: Son of Zyhu Bral Lux, the leader of the Order of Obscurity. Kas swore alliance to the Order and completely believed in its causes, he is the leader of the armies of the order. His father has already claimed immortality through the secret law of the order, Kas is well on the way to claiming immortality, but not quite. This aside he is still one of the finest warriors on the planet, he is no coward and will fight his enemies one on one, but if required to he is one of the finest, silent assassins.

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Now some villains, two of my favourite.

Number 1. IronFace.

Name: IronFace

Real name: Sonny Coaler

Age: 36

Gender: Male

Height: 6 2ft

Weight: 207lbs

Location: Depone City.

Abilities: Very high IQ, enhanced stamina, skilled in hand to hand combat, ability to learn almost instantly how to use to full effect any weapon and immunity to mind control. Also has deep underworld connections and is an expert assassin. Particularly loves the use of his two hand guns with the names Talon & Twister.

About: Sonny was born to brilliantly wealthy and utterly self-absorbed parents who cared more about their social status, and their business than their son; due to this neglect he kept to himself but was still an extremely good natured guy. By the age of 17 he was a developed, well-built and highly intelligent man, his parents wanted him to carry on the business name but he walked away, he joined the United States Marine Corps and stormed through the training, even the new combat programs were no problem to him. When back from his third tour he fell in love with a girl, a local café waitress, Clare. His parents completely did not approve and after arguments Sonny ran away with her and quit the army, his parents; so consumed with rage and their idea that their son had betrayed them they ‘arranged’ a hit, the assassin was not prepared to find Sonny with Clare and the hit went bad, the assassin escaped after killing Clare and seriously injuring Sonny, his face was burnt and torn up.

 He adopted a mask made from Iron, carbon-fibre with leather straps. He killed his family in a bloodlust rage took all their money, then connected himself with various under-world connections and from then forth established the name of Ironface, the masked killer. The stories are that he wears a white suit, white shirt and black tie, with black gloves and the matt grey mask.

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Number 2, Renegade - Hero.

Name:  Renegade

Real name: Kayleigh Garta.

Age: 23

Gender: Female

Height: 5ft 7

Weight: 152 lbs.

Location: Depone City

Abilities: Superhuman reaction speeds, she has peak mental conditioning, heightened agility and stamina, skilled user of knives and guns, skilled acrobat and a master in 23 martial arts, trained computer hacker and lock picker, professional driving skills and high knowledge in stealth and hiding and access to high grade equipment.

About: Born into a life of crime (mother, unknown; died in shortly after birth due to a ‘sickness’ which actually turned out to be an Arch_gene, and passed down to Kayleigh) raised by her father and older brother who were both professional criminals but never killed, they robbed banks and private homes, kidnapped and were well connected in the underworld. If you wanted to find someone, they would know. 

Kayleigh was a natural, her brother was ex-special forces and trained her in combat and stealth techniques, her father used to be a software designer for banks and internet firewalls, he trained her in hacking and lock picking. At the age of 21 a big job came up, they teamed up with an assassin called Ironface and after the job, this assassin tried to kill Kayleigh and her family. Her brother sacrificed himself for her and she escaped but barely. She was taken in by The Fox and has since been working with him.

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I have fully designed about 20 characters in detail, I am now going to show you some of them. My favorite ones.

Number 1. The Fox. - Hero.

Name: The Fox

Real name: Edward Hood.

Age: 27

Gender:  Male

Height:  6ft 2.

Weight:  218lbs.

Location: Depone City

Abilities: Superhuman reflexes, peak physical and mental conditioning (including master acrobat and free runner), heightened speed, agility, and stamina. Considerably high skills in stealth and a master of 103 forms of armed and unarmed combat, access to high grade equipment and master of fighting with a staff.

Suit/Mask: Made by his father the suit is Hardened Kevlar plates on a Silicon carbide fibre and is placed as multiple pieces of armour over a more flexible bodysuit for greater mobility and effect.

About: Born and raised in Depone City. His mother (a mutant with superhuman speed) died in child birth so his father raised him alone. His father worked with S.T.E.A.L.T.H in armour development. By the age of 20 Edward was working with his father, but all was not well; Ironface was closing in.
Edward found his father Robert after the assassination attempt, before he died, in his last breaths he said to his son ‘Step out and show the world, you are not afraid’ and handed him a picture of a fox.

Later that night Edward returned to an old completely hidden S.T.E.A.L.T.H bunker that opened out to a cave that was called ‘Fox’s den’. As he entered through the waterfall a palm print reader rose from the floor, it accepted Edward’s palm, the cave lit up and then a computer animated voice spoke out ‘Welcome to the Den…. Fox’ and as spoke, a glass case rose from the floor, placed with-in; a Dark red (separable parts) body suit, an extendable staff and a mask….

He stands alone, with his partner in justice keeping. He is not with S.T.E.A.L.T.H but they know where he is if they need him,

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So, my name's Ted, I'm from Norwich, England, United Kingdom.
I'm creating my own Comic Franchise called FinalOrbit Comics. I already have a tonne of characters and info about FinalOrbit

Here goes.

FinalOrbit Comics is set in an alternative world, where there are many forms of life across the galaxy, some people on earth were born with an ‘Arch_Gene’ a gene that can skip entire generations, a gene providing various attributes or abilities on a superhuman scale, some inherited the abilities through events and some have neither. To be a hero though, means more than to just have past human abilities.  Superheroes and supervillians are all across the universe.

RACES

Humans – The beings of Earth, Some have the Arch_Gene, but most do not. There are some men and woman of earth that rise to the challenge to make the world a better place without having this gene.

Sacryan – The dominant race of the planet Draiydu, the closest thing we can relate to them are angels. The technology of this planet is far greater than our own, in 10,000 years we would only just be catching up. The planet is 20 times the size of earth, yet only had 3 times the population.

All the men and women look as close to us as possible (apart from the wings), same structured bodies and features; they are all exceptionally well built and muscular.

Dratarian – The dominant race of the planet Tzjurac, they have had many wars with the Sacryan Empire but are now looking for peace, the Dratarian are workers of magic, shape shifting and attacks based on mentality..

Team affiliations -

S.T.E.A.L.T.H

(Special Tactical Espionage and Law-Enforcement Task-force Headquarters) -  A department set up by the United States government after the discovery of personnel with super-human abilities.

S.T.E.A.L.T.H operates all around the world in some of the most covert operations ever recorded, some ‘super humans’ work with it, some oppose it.